Delta. 1 Posted April 1, 2017 Share Posted April 1, 2017 hey boys and girls just wanted to ask if anyone would want a story about a high school girl that seems normal but her father gave her nanobots when she was little when under the control for the bots she's a assassin devoid of any emotion and feelings to the point where she I will say it how it is soils herself each time she is activated but on a added note when the urge to go while active also lets go lets me know cause I want to make a bit of a novel for the hell of it cheers Kyuu, WatchYouWet, facade and 2 others 2 3 Quote Link to comment
MikeyW 15 Posted April 2, 2017 Share Posted April 2, 2017 I think it sounds awesome, aside from the whole "devoid of emotions" as she would be a Boring character without any. Plus the embarrassing nature of the situation could be a whole thing. But I would be keen to read that. WatchYouWet 1 Quote Link to comment
guest 172 Posted April 2, 2017 Share Posted April 2, 2017 It would be interesting, but may I suggest submitting it to the editing team (or myself) before posting? (No offense, but your post had quite a few grammatical errors) Delta. 1 Quote Link to comment
Delta. 1 Posted April 7, 2017 Author Share Posted April 7, 2017 feel free to give any ideas there more than welcome and as for grammatical errors indeed not perfect tis my first time will review and ask for others opinions will give an update on progress hopefully with in a week if work gets off my back >.< Quote Link to comment
OmoCommando 38 Posted April 7, 2017 Share Posted April 7, 2017 I strongly recommend using punctuation. Run-on sentences make for a difficult read, no matter what. Quote Link to comment
Delta. 1 Posted April 27, 2017 Author Share Posted April 27, 2017 just a quickie peeps going to give a little teaser see what you guys think nothing major not setting any massive background to it just to the point I guess. march 14th status update...um yes doctor reports show that the black marked target is going on vacation, doctor: hmmm where about in the world Dubai doctor: Dubai hmmm perfect place to test our new sniper and project sakura *smile* yes doctor shall I said make it so doctor: yes activate project sakura once the code is sent the nanobots send a single to the brain and override all function key to the success of the mission. sakura at the time was at home when it was sent. still in her school uniform making tea. making her way to the door she put her shoes back on and got into a black car waiting outside for her mission a update and a 50.cal sniper where on the seat next to her. about 6hours later she was lying in wait over a mile away on top of a sand dune. sakura needed the loo but the mission was her only mind-set cause of the program of the nanobots controlling her. 40mins went by before nature called at the time she was lying down on top of a cover over the sand as to not sink. the clothes she was wearing was a black skirt a white shirt with the school tie around her neck bow in her long blonde hair black tights and blue cotton panties. looking into the scope of the sniper she started panting slowly at first nothing happened but after a few moments a little wet patch started to show on her panties no bigger than a coin large coin. she panted again and this time the patch grew going up to her bum cheeks and stopped. at this point her panties went dark from the pee after one last pant she gave before the flood gates opened pee ran down between her legs making a big puddle soaking her tights panties and shoes and most of her skirt the steam was so powerful coming out of her it was hissing for over 20seconds before stopping. Quote Link to comment
Delta. 1 Posted April 27, 2017 Author Share Posted April 27, 2017 lol sorry noticed some errors my bad Quote Link to comment
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