Zooky-Chan 9 Posted March 20, 2017 Share Posted March 20, 2017 One late night, in New York, there was a woman named Anna. She was watching the season finale when, all of a sudden, a Emergency Alert System notice appears with the deafening electronic screech. The text to speech voice read: "A unidentified large creature has been sighted emerging from the sea and into a street. Please evacuate your homes and follow police instruc-" At that point, the power went out, surrounding Anna in darkness. As she came out of the stairs, she found that the streets were devoid of life, cars crushed like tinfoil against the road and sidewalk. A loud roar could be heard in the distance.. OMOZILLA Odd premise, I know but, hey, there isn't anything like it, is there? Hello and welcome to my first attempt at a Interactive Story. This will most likely be rather simple compared to other Stories out there. There will a few things, though. The main thing I want to focus on is two mechanics. The Bladder Metre and the Difficulty Metre. The Bladder Metre is to keep track of what's going on in Anna's bladder, as I'm sure you've guessed. It goes from 1 to 10, 1 being empty and 10 "as full as a doctors wallet". The Difficulty Metre is more about how difficult it is to keep it in, This goes from a 1 to 11, 1 being "no effort", 11 being "lost control". Simple, but effective. I'll see if anyone's interested in this and, if there is a pulse in this thing, we'll get it started! I'm welcome to any problems or issues being addressed. MsFortune-Take, Bismiris and Zorb 3 Quote Link to comment
Nikeryda 181 Posted March 20, 2017 Share Posted March 20, 2017 Sounds good to me. Quote Link to comment
Zooky-Chan 9 Posted March 20, 2017 Author Share Posted March 20, 2017 2 hours ago, Nikeryda said: Sounds good to me. Thanks! It's my first time so do you know any tips for this kind of thing? Quote Link to comment
wedgeantilles 156 Posted March 20, 2017 Share Posted March 20, 2017 Sounds interesting. Tip: This kind of story takes quite some stamina from the author. Lots of interesting projects start finde, but die sooner then later. Quote Link to comment
Doomrun 3 Posted March 21, 2017 Share Posted March 21, 2017 7 hours ago, Zooky-Chan said: Thanks! It's my first time so do you know any tips for this kind of thing? I think sugessting a free participation in the narration proccess can be a good idea. Also I like your system with the character. Quote Link to comment
Grim Reaper 52 Posted March 21, 2017 Share Posted March 21, 2017 I like the premise, though out of simple curiosity, will this be the old fashioned Godzilla or the newer design? Quote Link to comment
This is Sparta 17 Posted March 22, 2017 Share Posted March 22, 2017 14 hours ago, Grim Reaper said: I like the premise, though out of simple curiosity, will this be the old fashioned Godzilla or the newer design? Obviously the 1998 version (kappa) Quote Link to comment
Zooky-Chan 9 Posted March 22, 2017 Author Share Posted March 22, 2017 16 hours ago, Grim Reaper said: I like the premise, though out of simple curiosity, will this be the old fashioned Godzilla or the newer design? New one (Shin Godzilla) Quote Link to comment
PPP 1,307 Posted March 23, 2017 Share Posted March 23, 2017 Reading the title, I initially thought Godzilla was the one who would be doing the peeing. I was very relieved to find out I was wrong. This sounds interesting, I'd like to see where it goes. Also, we do NOT talk about the 1998 American Godzilla. IT. NEVER. HAPPENED. Quote Link to comment
diokno44x 163 Posted March 23, 2017 Share Posted March 23, 2017 15 minutes ago, PPP said: Reading the title, I initially thought Godzilla was the one who would be doing the peeing. I was very relieved to find out I was wrong. This sounds interesting, I'd like to see where it goes. Also, we do NOT talk about the 1998 American Godzilla. IT. NEVER. HAPPENED. That's why it was killed in one Godzilla movie Quote Link to comment
PPP 1,307 Posted March 23, 2017 Share Posted March 23, 2017 21 minutes ago, diokno44x said: That's why it was killed in one Godzilla movie Oh yeah, and it was awesome. Quote Link to comment
OmoCommando 38 Posted March 23, 2017 Share Posted March 23, 2017 I think for anyone to really offer anything, your story needs to actually get moving. No one can offer constructive criticism on something that isn't there. In my experience, no matter how tame or wild the premise may be, as long as you write well and remain consistent, your story should be just fine. Don't concern yourself so much with what other people want. Write what you enjoy. Quote Link to comment
This is Sparta 17 Posted March 23, 2017 Share Posted March 23, 2017 3 hours ago, PPP said: Reading the title, I initially thought Godzilla was the one who would be doing the peeing. I was very relieved to find out I was wrong. This sounds interesting, I'd like to see where it goes. Also, we do NOT talk about the 1998 American Godzilla. IT. NEVER. HAPPENED. If it was Godzilla that was peeing, it would almost be a flood. That might be one of it's dangerous attacks if it was used Quote Link to comment
Grim Reaper 52 Posted March 23, 2017 Share Posted March 23, 2017 I hadn't meant the 1998 one, I had more been thinking King Kong vs Godzilla 60's style Quote Link to comment
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