Dimwitrolo

Wet in the Wastelands

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A

I can't really think of a good name for her :/

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I'll go B and I think Rivera has a nice ring to it.

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24 minutes ago, pumpkin juice said:

I'll go B and I think Rivera has a nice ring to it.

I like this name 

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I'll choose B. As for the winged one's name, how about Faratina?

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I'll say B, see if we can gather some support/cover fire for an attack on the slavers. 

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I'll go A and third Rivera.

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Update tommorow, I got a whole bunch of requests - by which I mean 3 - so they should be up on the art and douijinshi thread tommorow as well

should be...

Vote has gone to A, and the winged girls is to be called Rivera

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Hang on, trying to figure this site out

Good work DimwitRolo, you just managed to lose everything you wrote. Start again.

 

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C, Rachel doesn't seem to be in a position to run.  

For the optional can we tell Rivera if she wants to learn to hold she should wait a bit longer.  

We should also try to support Rachel as we're walking so she can focus on holding her needs

(The spoilers within spoilers was a bit confusing.  I'm not sure if that was intentional or not)

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11 minutes ago, Nikeryda said:

C, Rachel doesn't seem to be in a position to run.  

For the optional can we tell Rivera if she wants to learn to hold she should wait a bit longer.  

We should also try to support Rachel as we're walking so she can focus on holding her needs

(The spoilers within spoilers was a bit confusing.  I'm not sure if that was intentional or not)

Wow, you were fast, in the time it took you to read it I've already fucked up and deleted it all by mistake. You're one of the few people who ever got to read that story line.

New story should be up soon

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1 hour ago, Dimwitrolo said:

Wow, you were fast, in the time it took you to read it I've already fucked up and deleted it all by mistake. You're one of the few people who ever got to read that story line.

New story should be up soon

 

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This should be the second story you're reading now: When I was trying to post it first time around, with spoilers, I managed to delete the whole thing. Fun fact, each section takes about 1-2 hours to write, so that's 1-2 hours down the drain. So I'm re-writing it. Here we go, hopefully this time I don't delete it

As far as spoilers go, Ill post a spoiler at the end of the story, with numbered sections. If you want to read the spoiler'd part, you'll have to go over to it whenever I post a number. So when you see [1], you'll want to scroll down to the spoiler, then scroll back up before the next sections (which will probably be [2]). I cannot figure out how to make spoilers work otherwise, which is going to make this upcoming section a whole lot of fun...

Any way, let's go!

 

'So' begins Rachel. 'What do we call you?' she asks the winged girl

'Anything you want really. Nothing rude though' She answers

'How about Rivera? That sounds nice, I think' Rachel suggests.

'Why Rivera?' asks Jess

'Don't you like it?' Rachel asks her, sounding a little insulted

'No, I just wanted to know why'

'Rivera's nice!' the winged girl interrupts, grinning proudly at her new title

'Rivera it is then!' Julia confirms, and thus her name is Rivera. 'Right then, let's get over to that subway'

[1] - Go to the spoiler for this part, then come back. Or don't, up to you I guess.

If you're here, you're back from the spoiler or you don't want to go. Either's good, let's continue...

The four girls reach the station in about five minutes, looking out one last time to gauge the time of day before they go underground. It looks to be mid-late afternoon, they ought to find a place to camp soon-ish. Rachel, Julia and Jess decide to all give one can of food each to Rivera, and the four girls now all have three cans, which they'll reduce to two when they find a place to stop and eat. The four girls head down into the station

At the bottom of the stairs the girls enter the ticket hall, a room about two and half meters tall, with a yellow-tiled floor, and walls lined with ticket booths and shops. The room is divided by a line of entrance barriers, the ancient plastic doors somehow still in place.

'Should we get a ticket?' Jess asks, looking over to the glass booths, half of them empty, half of them manned by skeletons. 

'I don't know, I don't trust those skeletons' Julia answers. 'Have a quick look around for anything useful, then we'll head down'

'Look!' Rivera pipes up; 'Is that a toilet?' she asks, pointing to a yellow plastic bin on the wall. 'Somewhere for Rachel to go!'

'Why would there be a toilet out in the open like this?' Jess asks her. 'Everyone could see you going. Speaking of going, where do you go if not in toilets?'

'Usually any where. We don't wear anything under our dress, so we just pee where ever is out the way'

'What if you need to, uh, do more than just pee?' Rachel asks

'More or less the same thing' Rivera answers. 'Except a little further out the way. Why?'

[2] - Back to the spoiler

'Right then, we better get moving' Julia says. 'We'll have to jump over these barriers, then just head downstairs. The map on the wall says we're at the last station on the green line, so there's only one way to go'

'What if we get caught?' Jess asks

'Get caught doing what?'

'Jumping over the barrier without a ticket'

'Jess, the security staff have been dead for a couple hundred years. I'm sure they won't be too bothered by four girls hopping over without tickets'

'Okay' says Jess. 'But if anyone does come, you're the one who can explain it to them'

Julia looks at Jess for a minute, then the four girls move. Julia hops over first, her bare feet pounding into the dust, sending a cloud of dust into the air. Next is Jess, who's hoodie flies open as she slides over the ticket machine, her feet slapping against the floor on the other side and sending up more dust. Rivera flaps her wings and clears the ticket door by a couple of meters, her dresss flying over her head. She slips when she lands and falls on her backside where she can't see anything with her dress over her head. Rachel is next, and she hops over without issue, her dress flying up and showing off her new shorts before her boots slam into the tiled floor, breaking one of the yellow tiles. Rivera climbs to her feet, hoping the other three didn't notice her. The four girls jog down the stairs and onto the station

'Is this a good place to stop and eat?' Rivera asks

'Uhh, no. No it is not' Julia answers. 'It's not even dark outside'

'Yeesh, I'm huungry!' Rivera complains.

'What does your kind even eat?' Jess asks. 'With fangs like that you look kinda like vampires'

'For a snack we might eat the occasional small animal, but mostly we drink some blood from larger animals. Not too much mind, just a little' Rivera explains. 'On one hand it means we need to pee a lot - like right now - on the other it means we don't gain much weight'

'So you just pee where ever usually?' Jess asks again, to confirm

'Yeah. But I thought if I'm with you three I'll try to use toy-lets like you do'

'Also you might want to start wearing pants' Julia adds. 'Can't have you flashing everyone all the time'

'I haven't got hands' Rivera points out, tapping her wing-tips together. 'How would I put them on'

'We could help you' Julia says. 'And we'll take them down when you need to pee'

'Not sure I like that...' Rivera says

'We can't have you in just that dress Rivera, you'll attract attention' Julia explains. 'Bad attention.'

'ugh, fine' Rivera accepts. 'Is there anything I can eat?' she asks, changing the conversation.

'I might have a chocolate biscuit in my bag' Julia answers, as she starts to look inside it

'A whatlate thingit?' Rivera asks, confused.

'Chocolate. Biscuit' Julia says. 'Here' she says, holding one out

'Oh come on, it's already dead'. Rivera sighs, disappointed. 'It's not fun if you don't get to chase it first'

'It never was alive Rivera. It's a biscuit.' Julia says. Looking at Rivera, she can see she looks a little glum. 'I could chuck it for you, pretend it's alive'

Rivera's eyes light up at this suggestion, and Julia lobs the biscuit down the tracks. Rivera leaps after it, her wings throwing up dust from the floor as she does. A gentle pat signals the biscuit hitting the floor, and a less gentle thump signals Rivera landing on top of it. The other three girls, bemused by this, carry on walking over to her, as she picks it up in her wings and takes a bite, grinning with pride.

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[3] - Back you go

The four girls carry on down the tracks, Rivera nibbling on the biscuit as they do. The tracks are fairly dark, though illuminated by the occasional yellowing service lights on the walls. The floor itself is gravel, with wooden sleepers holding the steel rails. Jess, Julia and Rivera take care to only step on the smooth wooden sleepers, not wanting to hurt themselves if any sharp gravel sticks into their feet. Rachel's boots let her walk where she wants, her shorts, now in her hand, bashing against her legs as she does so

'How much further do you think it'll be now?' Asks Rivera

'No idea' answers Julia. 'What makes you ask?'

'I *Really* have to pee!' Rivera answers, pressing her wingtips against her crotch as she does. Usually by now I'd be peeing where I stood! I can almost feel myself peeing right now!'

'You are peeing right now' Julia answers, pointing to Rivera who has unwittingly let a small stream out, which hits the floor and splatters against her socks

'Yeep!' Rivera yelps, tensing her whole body to stop the flow

'You only let a little out, you can hold it' Julia reassures her. She doesn't feel quite so certain about Rachel however, and she looks over to her to see her with an expression of raw concentration

[4] - You know the drill

'We better hurry then' says Julia, as she looks back at Rivera, who is doing her best to not pee again. 'You could just go on the floor Rivera' she adds

'I could, but then I won't get used to holding it in for when I wear clothes'

'Fair enough I guess, we should hurry to the next stop'

They should hurry, right?

A: Yes, run! - The girls will run to the next stop. Julia, Jess and Rivera don't have shoes, so they have to be careful, and might trip over if they run. Running would also put pressure on the desperate girls, which could make them have an accident. If they make it though, they'll have more time to look for a toilet

B: Yes, but jog - Running is too risky, someone might trip. But jogging is safer, though slower. The girls use less energy jogging, but still enough that they might have accidents

C: No, carry on walking - Running is too risky, someone might fall or have an accident. Best to walk

OPTIONAL

1: Tell Rivera to just go anywhere - She might as well, no underwear to soak. Though she'll have to try harder to learn to hold it.

2: Tell Rachel to go anywhere - She hates doing that sort of thing out in the open, but does she have a choice? If she does she'll be fine, if she doesn't agree to go then the girls will waste time arguing 

 

[1] 'Can we make it quick?' Rachel asks, a sense of urgency on her voice. 'I really have to go. Badly.' A gently rumble from Rachel's stomach confirms her story. Julia nods, and the girls, realising Rachel's need, decide to hurry a little. (END)

[2] 'I was wondering why you'd suggesting going in a bin is all' Rachel says. 'Anyway, let's keep an eye out for one, I really...I really have to-' Rachel cuts herself off with some laboured breaths. 'Hn, I really have to go....hnn...Getting hard to hn..hold it in' Rachel bends over slightly, putting her hands on her knees for support. 'Hnnnn!' Her face flushes red, and it appears that she's either pushing as hard as she can, or she's holding it in as hard as she can.

'So what, did you just give up?' Julia asks her, a little shocked

'nnn-No! I can't help it! I'm trying to hold it! Hnn!' Rachel's breathing quickens, and after another ten seconds of urgent gasps, she straightens up again. 'We better hurry!' (END)

[3] As they catch up to her, Rachel bends at the knees again, as another wave of desperation hit. At first Rachel is quiet, pushing out a breath harshly, but with each harder push she begins to moan

'Hnn.....Hnnn!....HNNnnn!' Rachel begins to tear up a little as she has to force her body to stop her from messing herself. She stands silent for a moment, hand clutching her stomach, face red and eyes closed. She begins to open her eyes, and her stomach rumbles audibly. 

'I think that's the-HNNNNG!!!' Rachel almost flips herself over as she bends intensely at the waist, straining with all her strength to keep clean. Her body shudders for a moment, and the tunnels fall silent, until Rachel sighs loudly. 

'I won't last much longer' she admits. She slides off her shorts as she says this

'Are you going to go on the floor?' Jess asks, a little shocked

'No, I'm putting my wet panties back on. Don't want to ruin these new shorts if I can't make it' Rachel explains. As she pulls her panties up, she almost yelps as the icy cold cotton clamps itself against her body. 'L-let's keep going' (END)

[4] Rachel freezes in place again, bent over at the waist. She looks up at Julia, her eyes begging for help, before they clamp shut and-

'HNNNNNGG!' Rachel's whole body shudders before freezing still. The three girls look at her, silence filling the tunnel. A growl from inside Rachel interrupts the silence, followed by another moan

'HNNNNNN!!! HnNNN!!!'

Rachel gasps for air, before-

'HNNNN!!!'

Rachel shudders again, but manages to catch her breath'I have to do something!' Rachel manages to say. 'Not long left before I-HNNNNNNN!' Rachel shudders violently, then draws still again

'Oh jeez, I felt it that time, i-i-t nearly came out....We have to hurry - I don't have long!' (END)

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13 minutes ago, Nikeryda said:

 

I can't tell if I love you or hate you. It's kinda both

(It's all love baby and you know it)

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11 minutes ago, Dimwitrolo said:

I can't tell if I love you or hate you. It's kinda both

(It's all love baby and you know it)

This is in my top 3 favorites so I always jump on updates.

(Pro tip make the numbers colored so we can find them again easier)

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I say A, and for the optional choice, tell Rivera to just go.

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1 hour ago, Nikeryda said:

C, Rachel doesn't seem to be in a position to run.  

For the optional can we tell Rivera if she wants to learn to hold she should wait a bit longer.  

We should also try to support Rachel as we're walking so she can focus on holding her needs

(The spoilers within spoilers was a bit confusing.  I'm not sure if that was intentional or not)

Pretty much the same thing for me

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I can't get enough of your art and writing style, and it's all so cute. Plus you manage to blend omorashi/etc. with story and character development very well in my opinion. I hope you always find the time to continue this! 

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12 hours ago, Nikeryda said:

C, Rachel doesn't seem to be in a position to run.  

For the optional can we tell Rivera if she wants to learn to hold she should wait a bit longer.  

We should also try to support Rachel as we're walking so she can focus on holding her needs

 

That sounds good.

 

I absolutly loved the part about the "dead" biscuit.

That is such a fantastic detail, great job!

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I'll say C, and 1.

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Vote for C and tell em both to hold it, Rivera needs to learn and a bathroom can be right around the corner

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C. Tell Rivera to hold it, and Rachel to go.

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Well I guess I am going against most of the crowd here but I vote B.

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