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Faust really doesn't seem to know when to stop with these kind of things.....
But, compared to the other stories, [Which Faust thanks for being a ROUSING success, to all], Faust decided he wanted to also do something with a single..cohesive...Longer-running story.

A story based on one of Faust's favorite series.....Something that Faust has been wanting to run something for, for a long time. Granted, this will be far different from his own myriad of short-interactive tales....But, you know...

Faust just can't keep himself still sometimes. So...With a small wave, a thank you for delving in..And Faust's own personal apology for appearing scatter-brained again. ^^; Here ya go!

Though..Faust will warn: This one will likely go on for a fair bit longer...So....Be warned if it's a bit slower. There are some more choices to make, after all....

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Your mind feels hazy....
You don't know where you are....How you are....or, even who you are....Nothing but a nearly infinite void of blackness....

Darkness..As far as your eyes can manage. You can't find the ground...You can't see the sky...

You just...are. Your essence feels like it's flowing through the void....Constantly being pulled one way...or another. Forever....eternally...Just...existing in the void... When suddenly, a voice calls out to you.

'Can you hear me...?'

A voice.... Unfamiliar....Unknown....

But...A sign that the void is not eternal. That there is some other presence....

'Can you hear me?' it calls again...Prompting you to try to follow it as best you can. The dark void gives you no cues....But, as you drift amidst the sea of black...
Suddenly...A light. You see a beacon of hope emerge off the horizon......A goal...

You feel your presence drifting towards it....Being drawn to it....And, as you inch closer.

'If you can hear me....please. Come through the door..'

Do you really have any choice? You urge your presence through the light....It encompassing your entire being for a few moments in a flash.......

And then....

...............

An unfamiliar area...

And a strange tune...

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As the piano starts to play....You see man sitting before you....An older, balding man with a strange face, and a long nose. He seems to be resting his head in his hands...As bloodshot eyes look at you.

"Mmm...Welcome.....to the Velvet room.." he calls to you....In a hushed voice that has no trouble meeting your ears. "My name is Igor....I am...Delighted..to make your acquaintance."

He lightly rolls his hands, peering at you with a small smile.

"Though...I suppose before we can discuss much..You need to remember your form." He adds, with a low chuckle. "As you are now..You were lost...In the sea of the unconscious. A world...Where the collective thoughts of the world....All gather."

His hands roll back to where they were, as he finally extends one.

"I suppose another way of looking at it...Is that you are asleep." he adds, lightly. "But...A deep sleep. One that you are soon to rouse from. Unlike your regular sleep though...This awakening...Will awaken more than your conscious mind. Rather, it's an awakening....of the soul."

He runs his hand over a conjured blue table in front of you....And, in another sweeping motion...A medley of cards. Each with a different image....A difference essence.

"Each of these cards...incites a different sort of aspect of your soul." he starts, lightly. "All potential aspects..All parts that may encompass your inner self."

He sweeps his hands over them again...Before letting his hand go back to meet yours.

"Though..I suppose you should remember your physical form..before we welcome in your inner self." he adds with a soft chuckle again...Eyes resting on you.

"So..Why don't you introduce yourself? Being in this room....Should have allowed you to awaken..and recollect by now."

You don't know what secrets the room holds....Or entirely what the man is talking about. However, as he says..You feel your mind returning to you..And memories flowing, You glance down at where you expect your body to be...And do the best you can to speak.

"I am..." you start...As you feel your body becoming yours once again...

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[Character Creation]

(This is the most important part of the story....As it will dictate a lot of things moving forward. You will make many choices all throughout the tale..but they all start with this one...The most simple...yet prominent choices to be made. Faust will dictate which one is selected in the event of a tie, and occasionally a recommended one..But it all rests on you, readers. Your victory, or failure..Will be in your hands. By making this selection...You assume full responsibility for your actions. You know...

The usual Stuff.....)

Choice 1:

 

1. A girl [Recommended by the Author].

2. A Boy.

Choice 2:

[My Inner self is...]

1. A brilliant female swordsman, with fiery red hair

2. A beautiful woman, with an icy gaze.

3. An imposing figure, with a striking presence

4. An Emerald being, with wide wings....

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This is just getting too out of hand... Why, for whatever reasons, have we turned this into a porno? Isn't this supposed to be an action/social omo-esque story? I may be considered a kill-joy and

I'll go with outer male and inner female swordsman. 

Screw the damn name Yuki!

You close your eyes...Feeling your essence returning to you...And starting to form.

"Yes...I see." Igor's voice calls to you. "So..you have selected....her....as your inner self."

You lean over to pick up the card with the woman....Getting a closer look at her. Long flowing hair..Shining armor...

.....

After a few moments of touching it though, it seems to vanish in your hand. You look at your palm, as Igor gives a small, hearty chuckle.

"Do not worry...You have not lost her." he assures you, with a smile. "Rather...you will never lose her. For she is a part of you...As you are a part of her.."

"She is a part of me.." You add, a distinctly feminine tone to your voice. "And..I am a part of her.."

You look down with a slight bit of shock...A blue, ethereal form in the silhouette of a girl where your body should be.

"Do not be alarmed....You are merely recollecting your form." Igor's voice calls, with a small wave. "Simply picture your image....Your physical self..And it will be made into your reality. Can you recall your outer form?"

You close your eyes for a moment, and picture it....A hand forms in your mind..And the blue form shifts to a hand. You let your mind wander...Reaching out for that physical figure...

'I am...'

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[You have selected your inner self...And your outer form's gender. So now...Your physique is the only part in question to answer]

(You now must decide on your physical form's..figure. This is something that may either play up, or play down certain things.)

1.  Your Hair Color. and style? [Select any color of the proverbial Rainbow].

2.  Your Bust Size [Are you Flat? Buxom? Somewhere in between? Actual numbers are unnecessary, only a relative size]

3.  Your bladder Size [For fun, mostly. Moderate, weak, or Large? ]

4.  Your rump size [Flat butt, moderate butt, plump butt? Anything in between?]

(Faust apologizes for such front-loading of character creation, but he assures you..It's all important, in the grand scheme of things.)

Form: Female

Inner Self..?: [Brilliant Female swordsman, with firey red hair]

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1. Auburn hair tied into a ponytail.

2. Small-ish but not totally flat.

3. Strong.

4. Plump.

EDIT: Also! I think it's totally fantastic to see you so positively bursting with creative energy, Faust. Been a fan of your work all the way since Another note: Redux, so I'm happy you seem to be having such a great time with all this.

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3 hours ago, DerivativeWings said:

1. Auburn hair tied into a ponytail.

2. Small-ish but not totally flat.

3. Strong.

4. Plump.

EDIT: Also! I think it's totally fantastic to see you so positively bursting with creative energy, Faust. Been a fan of your work all the way since Another note: Redux, so I'm happy you seem to be having such a great time with all this.

I double down with everything here

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Your eyes open once more...And as you glance down again..You can see yourself again...Or, more properly.

You Remember yourself. You aren't totally Flat...but, you are far from buxom. A very modest bust that you get teased for.....About an average ability to hold your toilet urges...

About shoulder length reddish brown hair....That you usually tie into a ponytail. And....A rather generous bottom, if you do say so yourself. It's one of your most prominent features.....But..

"It looks like you have finally recollected yourself." Igor's voice calls, with a small smile. "Perfect. With your inner self awakened..And your outer form returned to you...You may now Awaken, properly in the world.

"Awaken..?" You say softly..As the man raises his hand...A small, shimmering key appearing in your hand.

"Hold onto this..." He insists, rolling his hands again. "For it will allow you to return..At a given time. And...You may properly...Be Set on your destiny."

"My...Destiny..?" You mouth in response, as the world starts to glow brightly.

"But for now..Farewell..My guest."

And....in another brilliant flash......The room is gone.

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Your mind is hazy....But, as you open your eyes, you notice that you're in the middle of the road. A worrying place to come to...Not aided by the fact that you are surrounded by what looks like...

"Coffins..?!" You gasp, staggering a bit in shock. Around you are a myriad of coffins...All basking in an unusual light. An...Emerald light..?

You turn your head to look up at the sky......And..You can't believe your eyes...

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"The...The moon.." You call to no one..Looking up. "It's...not supposed to be that color.."

The eerie green light shines over the area....Puddles of what used to be water now look disturbingly similar to pools of blood...And, as you start around nervously...

You hear some horrid...Haunting Sloshing sounds....

PANG...

Which, on top of being eerie, suddenly gives your body an unexpected kick of an urge. There's no two ways around it....

You need to pee. You weren't sure why you hadn't gone before...Or, if you'd even had a chance to before waking up in the strange world...but...You were going to have to make up for lost time soon.

Though, as it stands....It's hard to tell if it's even safe to do so. Just because you haven't ran into anyone, doesn't mean you won't...And those horrid noises keep following you....Surrounding you...

Feeling like they're trying to pour into your bladder itself. You are far from incontinent, but still...

'I need to figure out...What to do..' You think quietly...Closing your eyes for a moment to think....

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1. Look around for somebody in the streets.

2. Go into a nearby building to try to find someone.

3. Try to figure out what's making those weird, wet noises.

4. Try to find a quiet place to pee before worse comes worse.

5. Try to remember what happened before....In the other world

6. Try to remember why you're here.

???'s Condition: [This is the Physical condition of your character! Without a name to refer to her by, she's just ??? For now.]

Physical Health: Doin' Okay...
Willpower: Could be better...
???:  Unknown
Bladder Contents: Rather Full.....
Stomach Contents: Silent....
???: Unknown
???: Unknown
Mental State: Dazed...A bit confused...A bit worried.
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[AuthorNote: The various Conditions will be filled in as they become increasingly relevant. Though, for now.....Faust will lead off with the juicy bits..]

[Bladder Contents: Effects how much you need to pee. Goes from [Empty] (Just peed) to [Mostly Empty] (Recently peed) to [A bit Full] (Feeling first signs of pressure) to [Rather Full] (You're at the level which you'd definitely consider a bathroom) to [Desperate!] (You feel like you Need a bathroom, and wetting becomes a serious issue) to [BURSTING!!] (You feel like you're about to pop! As if straining too much will force a complete accident)

[Stomach Contents: Effects how much you need to poop. There's [Empty] (Just voided), to [Mostly Empty) [Recently voided) to [Silent] (No pressure, but growing), to [A bit full] (Very slight need) to [Rather Full] (You feel an urgent need) to [Gurgling] (You anxiously start looking for a place to void) to [Pushing..!] (You're on the verge of losing control) to [Descending!] (You're moments away from going where you stand) ]

(Special Note: If you have a wetting accident while your stomach is at [Gurgling] or above, you'll also have a messing accident. Comparatively, if you have a messing accident while your bladder is at [Rather full] or above, you'll have a pee accident too.)

(AuthorNote: While both kinds of desperation are involved....For the most part, unless personally requested between Incidents...Your character may relieve tummy urges between days. It accumulates far slower than piddle urges, so don't be turned off to the story because of that. However, as an aside...Your Physical health covers more than just Injuries.....And some days..
You may find parts of your body acting up a bit more....Like, if you have a stomachache...Your stomach contents might end up filling faster than even your bladder... Faust recommends you take care of yourself if you want to avoid accidents....Or, do deliberately foolish things if you want to cause more of them.)
 

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You decide that, while you're in an unfamiliar area......And, though you have a pressing need...

Knocking on the doors to random people's houses and trying to ask them for a chance to pee. No...You can find a store, more than likely...And....
You're kind of scared to be surrounded by all of these coffins. Perhaps finding a friendly face could lighten up the oppressive, otherworldly atmosphere.....

.......

You wander the area...Feeling your bladder dully ache as you wander by. The same...wet sloshing sound keeps following you...Making you nervous. You keep getting the feelign something is watching you....
And, as your bladder keeps pressing at your urges...You softly whimper, and let your hands press at yourself...No people around, meaning no reason to hide your need.

"Uuu..I hope I find someone soon." You call, as you pass through the area....Coming up on a sidewalk. Coffins still seem to litter the area somewhat haphazardly...When, in the distance....

A shadowy figure. A person?

"A..Ah..! Hey..!" you call, waving a hand. "Hey..! Over here!"

The shadowy figure turns at this....And you realize something as the hairs stand up on the back of your neck. The figure...

Is not human...

You see their figure starting towards you....But, not in the stride you expected. No...They seem to be sliding towards you...The shadowy figure...

Your legs start carrying you the other way, running for dear life. The adrenaline starts to pump through you...And you keep running. Far away as you can..
As quickly as you can...
To...some other part of the town....

'That's right..' you think, running. 'That's....This is a new town I just came to...'

It's coming back to you. You'd rode the train this far...To this new city of Tatsumi-Port Island. Your train got delayed...You rode late....And then...

.....

Your mind feels hazy again...As you glance around. The man is gone....But...

You hear that same, worrying sloshing sound...And your bladder pangs. Part of you wants to kneel down and go where you are....

But, at the same time, you feel like that noise is getting closer....Coupled with some footsteps. You hold onto your need a bit longer, and  start around the corner of a street...Hovering against the wall as the footsteps get closer. The sloshing noise seems to stop for a moment, and a quick peek reveals that there is another person around the corner.....And..something else. The questions form in your mind....As you piece together the image.

Who...is around that corner, with the...thing?

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[Who is Around the Corner?]

1. A boy, with shoulder-length green hair..Who looks like he's in trouble

2. A stern looking older girl, with an icy glare..Who looks like she's on a mission

3. A boy with short brown hair...Who looks far too relaxed for the strange situation.

4. A girl with pink hair, who looks as confused as you are.

5. A crimson-haired boy, who looks rather pissed off.

6. A blonde haired girl, who looks even more scared than you are.

???'s Condition:

Physical Health: Could be better...
Willpower: Still okay.
???:  Unknown
Bladder Contents: Rather Full.....
Stomach Contents: Silent....
???: Unknown
???: Unknown
Mental State: Nervous. [Prolonged time in this state will accelerate your bladder's urges]

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16 hours ago, Faust said:

[Who is Around the Corner?]

1. A boy, with shoulder-length green hair..Who looks like he's in trouble

 

Faust, is that you again?

 

Funsies aside, I have to say I don't remember half of the character descriptions being canonical characters in P3, but it has been years since I last played. The way this is going, it seems reminiscent of an altered P3 Portable. Will we get social links, or would that be too much? Also, Chidori and Junpei for life.

As for my vote, I also say the blonde haired girl. (Rei, maybe?)

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